xXsierraXx

Member since May 31, 2010

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Get Me

Posted Jul 16, 2010 · 12 lines · 2 critiques

i just wanted you to get it

i just wanted you to get me

i wanted you to understand

but things didn't go

according to plan

all you did was pretend

until you thought the problem

found its end

now i see

I've had my fill

you don't get me

and you never will

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July 2010
17 Sat

Received a critique
on Get Me from @jetz
"Hi Sierra, I dare say, we have all felt this a time or two. Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of using the lower case "I" but, if you choose to do so, I think it should be consistent. Line 10..'I've'..just my opinion. I a…"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on Get Me from @TimeIsNotAPromise
"i love it! absolutly love it! its my new favorite poem so beautiful great great job! :) Desu Haley"
16 Fri

Posted a poem
Get Me
"i just wanted you to get it"
Open thread 12 lines
June 2010
27 Sun

Received a critique
on Is It Wrong from @Beauregard
"will go a long way with this piece. Line two: "...happy [if] they died?" I can offer you so more suggestions, if you'd like. You're not evil. Anger, hatred, vengeance, these are feelings everyone feels, it's those that…"
19 Sat

Posted a poem
Is It Wrong
"Is it wrong to hate someone so much that you wish they would die?"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Tue

Highest posting month
June 2010 — 8 poems
12 Sat

Posted a poem
Undefeated
"i don’t know what to say"
Open thread 13 lines
May 2010
31 Mon

First critique offered
on "Moon-struck" by @raj
31 Mon

First publication
Darkness Revealed (sun and moon)
30 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.