weirdelf-test

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I work hard to be good

Posted Nov 17, 2009 · 17 lines · 1 critiques

I recycle
am known for kindness to animals
even get called a "cat lady"
(but that' not so mad, I breed cats)
I protest for native rights

Volunteer to support the elderly (I am 79)
protested the Vietnam war,
and apartheid
Not a fucking saint

but found out recently that ASIO (CIA to Americans)
has a flile liisting me as a subverive.

So I am proudly subversive

FUCK ASIO and the CIA and MI6.
In Australia Frazer and Menzies tried to shut us up.

In America the War on the self-inflicted war on terror seems to have succeeded.

The proof will be in about a thouand words criticising this poem.

America has lost free speach.

weirdelf-test’s timeline

May 2022
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5 years of membership
May 2013
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One year of membership
May 2012
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @judyanne
"premium member :) and i think you shoud make eddy get his own membership - then we might hear more from him love yu cat xxx love judy xxx"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @Candlewitch
"I am also a Greeter. :) Cat"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @Rula
"I know I am a newbie a fresh one here but waite ...Soon I shall be a premium mem in serving the world of poetry. ~^~Have a nice day~^~"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @scribbler
"freeloader, shop leader and all around rabble rouser............stan"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @Candlewitch
"I have a premium membership. Best of health to you. always, Cat (& eddy) p.s. should I make eddy get his own membership?"
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @Rula
"I am new here ."
08 Tue

Received a critique
on Test 2 status please from @Ian.T
"Status:- I think I am a prem mem but mem is gone as most of my Faculties. Good idea to check and see how many members are reading or participating in Neopoets great site. Jess it is sad that, I know, I grate on your ner…"
08 Tue

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
March 2010
27 Sat

Received a critique
on The Aristocat from @Skybones777
"I enjoy reading it..I think you can make a great short story from this... by the Way I only drink Aristocrat Vodka... You have inspired me to write about my cat thank you... Peace be with you...Chat wit you soon...Later…"
November 2009
24 Tue

Critiqued
"untitled" by @abrelosojos
"if you can write it you can title it. but i loved this, felt it, truly, deeply felt it. How about "Your face hovers" or "You haven't left" just some suggestions kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect bod…"
24 Tue

Critiqued
"Love Affair..." by @Geezer
"and even as I read the end I was still crying, you old bastard! A powerful, beautiful and courageous poem. kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all"
17 Tue

Posted a poem
I work hard to be good
"I recycle"
Open thread 17 lines
17 Tue

Critiqued
"Blood pools" by @DawningDaytripper
"There should be more revenge in the world. I only don't know why you use the shy "f**k" we all know you mean fuck, even the kids. kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all"
17 Tue

Critiqued
"Anatomy of a Mask" by @Ravenshakti
"it is brilliant the way you reveal both the falseness and the truth of the masks we must all assume. Am dying for you to come out. kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all"
17 Tue

Critiqued
"Diana Lucifera" by @Ravenshakti
"and go for your integrity, sister. if that is not incestuous, you darling being! kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all"
October 2009
05 Mon

Critiqued
"serenade" by @jabuu
"to me this poem ended at Or hold me either he rest was inessetial. Poetry must regard each word as a gem. I loved it up to.... Or hold me either kind regards, but I told you Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body…"
September 2009
30 Wed

Critiqued
"Baby Bear" by @rockinout87
"I still hae a teddy bear I have had for 60 years. Its a bit worn out kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all"
30 Wed

Critiqued
"You" by @seabhac
"Maybe my comments, I am well read and know quality, but I taught schoolkids for 40 years and am only now trying to express myself... perhaps I would have been a better teacher... I have always been more passionate about…"
28 Mon

Posted a poem
My ghost
"I have lost my ghost"
Open thread 17 lines
20 Sun

Posted a poem
The Aristocat
" "
Open thread 39 lines
15 Tue

First publication
Australian Mist
15 Tue

Posted a poem
Australian Mist
" "
Open thread 11 lines
15 Tue

First critique offered
on "Glimmering the Ethereal" by @Seren

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Membership begins

on The Aristocat from @Skybones777

"untitled" by @abrelosojos

"Love Affair..." by @Geezer

I work hard to be good

"Blood pools" by @DawningDaytripper

"Anatomy of a Mask" by @Ravenshakti

"Diana Lucifera" by @Ravenshakti

"serenade" by @jabuu

"Baby Bear" by @rockinout87

"You" by @seabhac

My ghost

The Aristocat

Australian Mist

Australian Mist

on "Glimmering the Ethereal" by @Seren

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