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Baby Bear

  Baby Bear
 Sweet and loving,Tender and caring,Always there for me,My darling Baby Bear.
 Worn from use,And still hanging in there for me,You never let me down,My coveted Baby Bear.
 I cry,You dry my tearsWith your soft layers,My constant Baby Bear.
 I shout,You can hear me,I can count on you to listen,My patient Baby Bear.
 I need to hit something,And you take it easily,Not a scratch on you,My strong Baby Bear.
 You keep away the nightmares,When I hold you in my sleep,Yet you’re always fully rested,My fearless Baby Bear.
 You’re the one that I hug tightly,Burying my face deep in your plush quilting,Breathing in your homey scent,My familiar Baby Bear.
 I love you more than anything,My darling,Coveted,Constant,Patient,Strong,Fearless,Familiar,Baby Bear.
— rockinout87, Sep 29, 2009

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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

How nice

What a comfort your bear is. I have a unicorn and a pegasus, lol, I love them just as I do this poem. Well done. Love Lyz. XX
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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

I suspect this baby bear

is a living human, but somehow not quite enough oor enough there. Am i wrong? Beautifully written but I am a traditionalist when it comes to poetry so I prefer left aligned, the formatting makes my eyes cross. kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all
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rockinout87

16 years 8 months ago

thank you! baby bear is a

thank you! baby bear is a blanket i've had since i was born, and it was my brother's before that, so yes, it's very special to me. i'm glad some of you have things close to your heart as well, and i'm also glad that you've commented on the poem. thanks again, britt
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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

glad to be wrong

I still hae a teddy bear I have had for 60 years. Its a bit worn out kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 8 months ago

Bwaaaaaaaaaa. I never had a

Bwaaaaaaaaaa. I never had a blankie, teddie or doll. Wait a minute, I had cats! ;-) Next poem you write darling, write it from your baby bear's viewpoint. k? ~A