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Seren
Seren
Sep 02, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Glimmering the Ethereal

The magic of life
is time in mind,
weaving from another
it lead to mine

A glimmer that traveled
an ethereal breath,
exhaling did morph
this illusion to stretch

Taking myself
through thought and time,
making it easier
in the rhyme

Weaving threads
of love and light,
beauteous words
to ward away fright

Hand to ground
I feel the earth,
drawing on mysteries
my spirit does search

Face to the wind
Separate to glide,
soaring the eddies
a Law physics denied

Immersing in liquid
soaking up love,
water my blessing
I grow from above

Walking in flames
I fire with need,
gleaning a light
no dark can impede

Traveling the elements
in an ethereal breath,
My joy is in word
and I continue the stretch

 

— Seren, Sep 02, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Beyond the Black Stump..Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda, P.K.Page, W.H.Auden, to many and various to include them all ...

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Critiques

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lyz

16 years 9 months ago

Bout Bloody time

Fun, Schmun, Beauty in these words, very clever write. I had my coffee ready this morning. Not now. Worth the wait, just so lovely, and from reading this your spirit is on a high and go girl, continue to fly. Love the lot. Love, Lyz.x.
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

LOL ... Sorry I crashed out

I had my journal in my hand when I woke up at some ungodly hour this morning , I was halfway through my edit lol and musta passed out , I only woke up at 12 ... jesus it was nice to sleep in my own bed , I am going back in a minute LOL ... rest for the next few days I am exhausted , So glad you liked it was just a bit of fun last night on the train I had a message from a friend yesterday and this is what came out of it .. just a thought lol much love and hugz Jayne x x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall"
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Bosscombat

16 years 9 months ago

:)

hey j-knee 2 bums nice write! obviously the trip home was alright i dont think i read anything about fighting trains or beating up conductors :p im so glad u wore ur fat controller hat onto the train!!! like i said another great write i dunno how u do it ♣
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

:O:O:O:O

LMAO J-Knee 2 bums ... your a bad man they all gonna think I got a huge ass when its actually something else buttttttt shhhhh up you :|... I am laughing like I was on your verandah yesterday arvo ... not as mental though ,omg the fat controller hat,that doesnt fit anyone else ... I love you huni ... needed a smile :D:D love and biggest hugs J-knee 2bums :P rotflmfao god your a bad man can't believe you called me that here :O And huni I aint explaining and you better NOT either :D:D:D hahahahahaha "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
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CyberSpace

16 years 9 months ago

lovely put 2gether u floozie

lovely put 2gether u floozie loved it they just keep gettin better & better & better & better & better & better & better woot woot love ya baby ur hubby
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Are you and matty plotting

Are you and matty plotting against me ,god shhhhh with the pet names guys,love yas but shesh dont want 3000 people calling me floozie lmfao love you baby glad you like it ;) mwahhhhhhhhhhhh ....Qutoe:-"We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Jayne

These guys are starting to blow your cover, LOL! You better get yourself a whip and chair so you can keep them in lion, er in line. Beautiful poem full of your sweet spirit. My favorite lines are: he magic of life is time in mind, weaving from another it lead to mine A glimmer that traveled an ethereal breath, exhaling did morph this illusion to stretch Love, Cat
Seren

Seren

16 years 9 months ago

Dearest Cat LOL

I have a few nicknames JayC of course, and Floozie snake calls me that, Matty calls me JayKnee 2 bums cannot explain that one, though ,I can tell you I dont have a huge arse LOL .. Blondie, Nana, and Mumma J and of course Floss and sweet Baby Jayne ... my god I sound like a cartoon character, I dont know why but people seem to have pet names for me lots of different ones it can get confusing I can tell you LMAO ... Its cool I can control them ... I hope :| lmao he he *S* sooo glad you liked this one its another when I wrote it? I thought of you and whether you would like it , i often do when i write ones like these biggest love and hugz Jayne x x ...Quote:-"We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Liz

Thank you for reading this is one,its one of my favourites ... Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
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weirdelf-test

16 years 8 months ago

I don't know what to say,

You seem to say in your comments that this is a a bit "flip", I guess I have been used to poetry not been taken seriously, and this is serious, it made me think. Thank you, meow
Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Meow

I dont quite know what you mean about flip , but this for me was a serious write, in my comments I am slightly mental sometimes lol so dont ever think I dont take this seriously I do very much so ... it has become a passion and a love in my life ... I know your new to the site so I thank you for taking the time to come read me and welcome !! I will be round to see what you have been writing , and I am glad this write could get you thinking it was writen with that intent ... kind regards Jayne x x