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Love Affair...
I'll get you if I can...You know I will
It's only a matter of time... until
The feeling of peaceful surrender
The spell you put me under
I'll wait for you. You will need me yet
You know it's true, it's a sure bet
I hear you sing, the same old song
You won't get me! "I say...it won't be long"
Breathe deep and hold me, touch my brain
The soothing spell of nicotine,
Gentle feel, like a soft summer rain
Remember all we've been
I held you close in times of bleak despair
Helped you up, and calmed you down
Kept you from pulling out your hair
Made you really funny, acting like a clown
Com'on, tell me you love me, friend
Let me caress you once again,
Just one more time, then I'll let you go
Just once...No one has to know
Nay, get behind me you smoking son
There is nothing you hold for me
I don't see any very good reasons
Not now,,, I'm finally free
Critiques
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Gee
weirdelf-test
16 years 6 months ago
I read this as a love poem
themoonman
16 years 6 months ago
Guy...
hardcorechick28
16 years 6 months ago
awesome
lyz
16 years 6 months ago
First and foremost