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you entered me and
still haven't left

i feel you inside me
when i'm
falling asleep,
waking up
and then in other places
not so convenient
like during class
or the movie theater

i am starving for
your salty pleasure juices
and the scent
of our sex

whoever came before
i cant even remember
they fucked me
watching the clock
and licked my skin
with a cat's tongue
but you made love to me

if ever someone
should come after,
your face hovering above me
will haunt me
day and night
— abrelosojos, Nov 24, 2009

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weirdelf-test

16 years 6 months ago

I really hate untitled poems,

if you can write it you can title it. but i loved this, felt it, truly, deeply felt it. How about "Your face hovers" or "You haven't left" just some suggestions kind regards, Jean, meow, bite, purr, yowl and perfect body language express all