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TREK CUT SHORT

Posted Aug 30, 2025 · 32 lines · 5 critiques

Silently the snow flakes fall
from far above the poplars' crown
as I walk this wooded path
a mile or so outside of town.

they slowly cover up the duff
and the sleeves of my old coat
as they join with their brethren
and thus end their final float.

I pause to take everything in
for snow round here is a rare thing
even one which is this thin
so I've come to leave my footprints here.

Soon I come to where cedars turn thick
and shelter the ground underneath.

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I carelessly step on a stick
whose loud crack makes me grit my teeth.

The sound's report startles a deer
which stares my way and stamps it feet
then on catching my scent she bounds away.
I wish that my legs were so fleet.

I watch as her white tail leave
then catch a glimpse of scarlet red
which becomes a male cardinal
with a raised crest flared on his head.

A swirl of wind shakes through this copse
which sends the cardinal to wing
through the cedars' sagging tops
which sheds the the sparse snow with their swings.

A handful of which goes down my neck
causing a shiver down my spine
Which makes me turn my way toward home
before I trip upon a an unseen vine.

scribbler’s timeline

September 2025
30 Tue

Received a critique
on TREK CUT SHORT from @Simon
"This is a wonderful work I kept reading over and over because I like it, but this two lines down below 👇 👇 I think they needs refining just suggestion. "which sheds the the sparse snow with their" "swings.before I trip…"
06 Sat

Contest commendation
Neopoet Weekly 08/31/25 to 09/06/25

with "TREK CUT SHORT".
01 Mon

Received a critique
on TREK CUT SHORT from @Ray Miller
"Aren't you referring to snowflakes rather than leaves?"
August 2025
31 Sun

Received a critique
on TREK CUT SHORT from @Ray Miller
"Enjoyed the read. Starts off well, the first stanza's rhyme and rhythm should be a template for what follows but isn't quite. I don't know the word "duff" in this sense. In the UK up the duff is slanf for being pregnant…"
30 Sat

Posted a poem
TREK CUT SHORT
"Silently the snow flakes fall"
Open thread 32 lines
June 2025
13 Fri

Posted a poem
WHEN DAYS BECOME EMPTY
"My boots exit the leafy duff"
Open thread 24 lines
May 2025
03 Sat

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2025
18 Tue

Posted a poem
INTERUPTED TREK
"Silently small snow flakes fall"
Open thread 28 lines
December 2024
31 Tue

Contest commendation
12/24 What is Friendship?

with "TWO SEAT BENCH (friendship contest)".
September 2024
06 Fri

Contest commendation
Autumn Arrival Image Prompt Contest

with "AUTUMN'S CUSP".
June 2024
30 Sun

Contest commendation
June 2024 Neo Gem

with "TO WALK BENEATH ASPENS".
February 2024
06 Tue

Contest commendation
10,000 Comment Milestone ~ Scribbler

with "THE STEP".
06 Tue

Community honor
10,000 Comment Milestone ~ Scribbler

A community contest dedicated to scribbler.
April 2021
01 Thu

First contest commendation
Seeing things Differently

with the poem "IN HINDSIGHT (march contest)".
June 2020
18 Thu

Posting milestone
1,000 poems posted
May 2020
03 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
October 2018
23 Tue

Most-discussed work
UNFINISHED JOURNEY (Oct. Contest)

62 critiques to date.
July 2015
20 Mon

Critique milestone
10,000 critiques given
May 2015
03 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
December 2012
20 Thu

Posting milestone
500 poems posted
January 2012
26 Thu

Critique milestone
5,000 critiques given
May 2011
03 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2010
15 Wed

Highest posting month
December 2010 — 32 poems
November 2010
29 Mon

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
July 2010
13 Tue

Critique milestone
1,000 critiques given
May 2010
05 Wed

First critique offered
on "Charlatan " by @xena465
04 Tue

First publication
homeplace
03 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

I find it hard to NOT be inspired by my wife Susan.

Location: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets

Frost

Burns

Longfellow

Poe

and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

Contest Wins

Winning Submission	Contest	Contest Date
TREK CUT SHORT	Neopoet Weekly 08/31/25 to 09/06/25	31 August, 2025 – 6 September, 2025
TWO SEAT BENCH (friendship contest)	12/24 What is Friendship?	1 December, 2024 – 31 December, 2024
TO WALK BENEATH ASPENS	June 2024 Neo Gem	1 June, 2024 – 30 June, 2024
AUTUMN'S CUSP	Autumn Arrival Image Prompt Contest	23 August, 2024 – 6 September, 2024
THE STEP	10,000 Comment Milestone ~ Scribbler	6 February, 2024
THE LONELY ONES	Neopoem Of The Week July 24 To July 29th 2023	24 July, 2023 – 29 July, 2023
OFF RAMPS	Neopoem Of The Week week of May 15 2022	8 May, 2022 – 14 May, 2022
CONNECTION LOST (voice mail from the grave)	Neopet Random Challenge # 14	1 April, 2022 – 1 May, 2022
EXEMPT (December poem to friends now gone)	Write a Holiday Poem To A Friend On Neopoet	1 December, 2021 – 31 December, 2021
IN HINDSIGHT (march contest)	Seeing things Differently	4 March, 2021 – 1 April, 2021

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Collaborative Poem Workshop #2	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2022-08-11	Concluded
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NARRATIVE POETRY SHOP (Let's get started)	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2021-04-17	Concluded
RHYME PATTERNS (let's begin)	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2021-02-24	Concluded
Critique review basics	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2020-09-11	Concluded
Idle Time Poetry	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2020-07-19	Concluded
Idle Time Poetry	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2020-07-09	Concluded
Titles	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2020-05-26	Concluded
Rhythm and Meter in Poetry	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2020-02-10	Concluded
Critique For New And Old	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2020-01-16	Concluded
Prose as poetry: the prose-poem	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2019-12-04	Concluded
Immersing the Reader Via Imagery Part 2	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2019-09-22	Concluded
Immersing the reader via imagery (Let's get started)	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2019-09-16	Concluded
Cellar Door	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2019-03-27	Concluded
Error	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2019-01-06	Concluded
Implied Imagery SHOP Here we go !	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2018-11-16	Concluded
The Great, Big, All-Inclusive Critique Workshop	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2018-06-18	Concluded
Basic and Essential Meter	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2018-04-12	Concluded
UNFINISHED WORKS	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2018-03-28	Concluded
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2018-02-11	Concluded
Poets of West Africa in English	(syllabus)	Splash Pool		Concluded