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PRECIOUSLYSET1
Member since April 11, 2012
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Safe Surprise
In this chamber safety
still sleeps
Darkness surrounds me such
sweet relief
Categorized by infinitesimal
proportions
Plagiarized into uncomfortable
contortions
Supporting my belief in
solitude, these walls hold me
Reporting isolation as what my
soul needs
I believe my mind id wandering
far away from home
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I believe I shouldn't wait
my soul yearning to roam
My dreams,
Are they dreams?
leave emptiness inside
Ahollow home was made right
before my very eyes
Surprised?
PRECIOUSLYSET1’s timeline
- April 2022
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11 MonAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2017
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11 TueAnniversary
5 years of membership
- October 2013
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28 MonReceived a critique
on Safe Surprise from @wesley snow
"I will point out the typographical errors because it's what I do best. "my mind (is) wandering" and we need space between "a" and "hollow" Personally I try never to allow anything to leave my influence without it be exa…" -
28 Mon
- September 2013
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- August 2013
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29 ThuReceived a critique
on Plea to the Condemned(Revised) from @Ian.T
"Your religious beliefs are for you to have, what you write of as a poet holds the world to inspection in thoughts and actions. We are Spiritualists here, Anne my Wife is an international medium so we really let others t…" -
28 WedReceived a critique
on Plea to the Condemned(Revised) from @Ian.T
"Your use of enjambment (me saying this with the help of Rula) I thought was quite good and showed a great deal of thought in this piece. It is one type I haven't tried as yet it seemed outside of my writing for some rea…" -
26 Mon
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15 ThuHighest posting month
August 2013 — 6 poems
- April 2013
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11 ThuAnniversary
One year of membership
- April 2012
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28 Sat
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13 Fri
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13 FriFirst publication
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11 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
SEEMING TO CONTAIN ALL MY SELVES WITHIN, I TEND TO CRAVE A PLACE TO RELEASE THESE " CRAZIES " INTO A WORLD SET ASIDE JUST AS A PARK FOR THEM TO STRETCH THEIR LEGS AFTER A LONG JOURNEY HELD BACK FROM WHAT THEY REALLY WANT TO DO ..
I am the proud mom of 3 kids, all boys, 16yr, 15yr, and 23months old ..
Location: LOUISIANA, USA
Favorite Poets
H.P. LOVECRAFT
EDGAR ALLEN POE
Recent Work
Safe Surprise
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Mess of disgrace
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Plea to the Condemned(Revised)
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Prophesies Denied
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Plea to the Condemned
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Internalizing
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I'm your dreams
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Watching
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Workshops
| Skill level: | ||||
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| The Complete Poem- Start to Finish | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2014-01-14 | Concluded |
| The Bottom Line | (syllabus) | Olympic Pool | Started 2013-09-09 | Concluded |
| Naked Emotion, Truth and Originality | (syllabus) | Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool | Started 2013-07-30 | Concluded |
| FROM PROSE TO POETRY | (syllabus) | Splash Pool | Started 2012-04-21 | Concluded |