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Irenicus
Member since May 18, 2020
Member for 6 years
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Let's talk a little
The busy world and its machinations
have overwhelmed our little space.
The routined utterance of people
without life, without substance
that float in dull air
have made the last bird
to look once in the sky and sigh.
so many words wasted
at the breath of the day
and still no dreams,
no promise of change in the end.
Let's for instance
talk for the sake of talking
Let's talk like the birds
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whose utterance
is as wild and free-flowing
as the Niagra, not bound
by suspicion or ill-convoluted
expression.
Let's know each other a little
and stop being strangers.
Only then can the dawn
be given a new name.
Irenicus’s timeline
- May 2025
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18 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- May 2021
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18 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
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08 SatReceived a critique
on Let's talk a little from @Geezer
"I missed this one. I agree with your theme and the premise that if we converse, truly listen and hold intelligent conversations with one and other, the world will be a better place. Spare lines for a poem that encompass…" -
03 MonReceived a critique
on Let's talk a little from @Ray Whitaker
"To the Niagra falls, I mean. I like your piece. It says a lot with as few words as possible. The inherit request in it charges the reader." -
02 Sun
- December 2020
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02 WedReceived a critique
on In Love with a Prostitute from @lovedly
"needs a second read in your part of the country prostitution breeds a poet of your side told me if each one adopted a prostitute what would so many others do just think there are so many who can't afford one for years m…" -
02 Wed
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01 TueFirst critique offered
on "Transition" by @Miriam Louis
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01 Tue
- May 2020
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18 MonFirst publication
Unremembered
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18 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I am a novice poet who is still learning this beautiful art.
Location: West Bengal, India
Favorite Poets
Swami Vivekananda
Sri Aurobindo
Robert Frost
E.E Cummings
Recent Work
Let's talk a little
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In Love with a Prostitute
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Winter Again
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Unremembered
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