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Anatomy of a Mask
She put on her pretty mask
today...
And this is what the mask
will say:
"It's all so good
my heart
this way."
The man has slipped
his on as well
this one explains
where he will dwell.
The other one
laughs
fixing hers up
this one
will take her
straight to the top.
The lovely sex starlet
want-to-be-queen
and we know exactly
just what she means.
Her mask
speaks so sweetly
of her tender lust,
the body to her
is all she can trust.
And here comes another
to speak of the loveless,
for him
his mask
becomes his harness.
A mask made of poems
sometimes we wear
love looking out
in a deep
silent stare.
Poetry flowing
like tears on a mime
moving like spirits
now lost in time.
The words may just feel
as hard as cold stones,
no flesh is allowed
to touch
the strong bones.
A face of lost song
a tune that we dance
to keep it alive
this now splendid trance.
No time to look
behind the mask...
To find the old truth
becomes the new task.
Yet the Soul
does cry out
"See...
I am here!"
And the mask will reply
"You are not,
my dear."
Critiques
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dearest Raven:
Ravenshakti
16 years 8 months ago
My Dear Hugo...
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Raven
Ravenshakti
16 years 8 months ago
Hello there Lyz...
Tony Udo
16 years 7 months ago
Anatomy
Ravenshakti
16 years 7 months ago
Hello Tony...
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Raven, I was just
Ravenshakti
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Anna...
weirdelf-test
16 years 6 months ago
You have great depths
Ravenshakti
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Jean...