Layune

Member since October 13, 2009

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Living; Habitual Existence

Posted Oct 8, 2018 · 21 lines · 1 critiques

There are moments
We seek and believe to be true.
Unlike our present,
They are fleeting; they bare no name.

Desire seeks them.

Questing for conquest
My heart follows,
In-tune with curiosity;
Yet, far removed from sanity.

These moments,
Escape Reality’s reach.

They are fiction, fairy-tales we speak of.

Imagination at its finest deceives me.
I am not ‘us.’

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I am not ‘we.’
I am a bystander.

I am the character,
Active participant in a cameo,
Contrasting wealth and privilege.
I can only be ‘me.’
A subsidized existence.

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October 2024
12 Sat

Anniversary
15 years of membership
October 2019
12 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
March 2019
17 Sun

Received a critique
on Living; Habitual Existence from @Cloudthings
"Great write here, I wouldn't want to change it, it reached me with solid good sensibility, I enjoyed the style, meter, verbiage & content... It's probably one that could provide a variety of interpretations each time it…"
October 2018
08 Mon

Posted a poem
Living; Habitual Existence
"There are moments"
Open thread 21 lines
July 2018
15 Sun

Received a critique
on Youth from @raj
"I liked the language as well as the rhythm and pace of your poem. A poem of this nature could do well with something written in "Last few words" to bring more comprehension....I did not understand the relevance of "spar…"
15 Sun

Posted a poem
Youth
"In the rambling of feathers"
Open thread 27 lines
December 2015
24 Thu

Received a critique
on The View from @Esker
"I could feel the poem move the descriptors..time pondering and delved maze untamed.... thank U"
20 Sun

Posted a poem
The View
"Come along to the view."
Open thread 29 lines
October 2014
12 Sun

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2010
12 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
December 2009
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 5 poems
October 2009
16 Fri

First critique offered
on "Music" by @Adrian Kabigting
12 Mon

First publication
Day by Day
12 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

Layune

Living; Habitual Existence

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December 2009 — 5 poems

on "Music" by @Adrian Kabigting

Day by Day

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