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Feb 16, 2010
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One Coffee Cup
the warm distant breeze calmed my nerves,
the waves whispered back and forth those words I love,
and the scent forgave my desolet stare.
yes
the rich brown lair wrapped so smoothly around my feet
swerving as the levels progressed.
no hesitation was claimed,
no frozen space took place,
for truth and all tuned into the heart
having a fine melody accompany the sweet release
so then
with the fragile touch
I received grace upon my day
the waves whispered back and forth those words I love,
and the scent forgave my desolet stare.
yes
the rich brown lair wrapped so smoothly around my feet
swerving as the levels progressed.
no hesitation was claimed,
no frozen space took place,
for truth and all tuned into the heart
having a fine melody accompany the sweet release
so then
with the fragile touch
I received grace upon my day
— Layune, Feb 16, 2010
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themoonman
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