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Dec 28, 2009
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Silent Cease
the dream of leaves
whispers so fragilely
out into the fears
of my hidden heart
with no more
than a thrust,
pierced I sleep,
slowly drowning
beneath blank sheets
dipped in a velvet wine
the illusion fades
all is one
a drowse is met
all is gone
whispers so fragilely
out into the fears
of my hidden heart
with no more
than a thrust,
pierced I sleep,
slowly drowning
beneath blank sheets
dipped in a velvet wine
the illusion fades
all is one
a drowse is met
all is gone
— Layune, Dec 28, 2009
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Critiques
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Ah, I sigh
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
cryptic and wonderful.
Layune
16 years 3 months ago
I glad you have both enjoyed