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Forgetting

Looking back
I just can't relate

All always seems to go away
through the weaving winds,
Having the day doused
with a sweet lemon scent

Th pages come to read clearly,
allowing for thought to take form,
From the swerving waves
to the endless days

So from leaf to green
the grip is formed,
tuning the growling chimes
with a whispered light

And with a sole stare
There lays nothing there

— Layune, Mar 07, 2010

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Region, Country: California, United Sates, USA

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

the answer to your avatar is "why not?" hehe

A superb poem. You incorporated your imagery with the concepts, especially the ending. Cheers, Jess, “The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue.” Emma Goldman