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Mar 07, 2010
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Forgetting
Looking back
I just can't relate
All always seems to go away
through the weaving winds,
Having the day doused
with a sweet lemon scent
Th pages come to read clearly,
allowing for thought to take form,
From the swerving waves
to the endless days
So from leaf to green
the grip is formed,
tuning the growling chimes
with a whispered light
And with a sole stare
There lays nothing there
I just can't relate
All always seems to go away
through the weaving winds,
Having the day doused
with a sweet lemon scent
Th pages come to read clearly,
allowing for thought to take form,
From the swerving waves
to the endless days
So from leaf to green
the grip is formed,
tuning the growling chimes
with a whispered light
And with a sole stare
There lays nothing there
— Layune, Mar 07, 2010
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weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
the answer to your avatar is "why not?" hehe