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Oct 12, 2009
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Day by Day
We walked into the darkness
Blinding the bestowed gift
People fell before our sides
And yet, cold blood is what it was
Only the wretched hope
Laid within our bloody grasp
The once ideal promise
Captivated our fragile hearts
Nevertheless, all decays
Into that tale told in the past
Life leaks its own hidden wounds
Never knowing if we'll return
Blinding the bestowed gift
People fell before our sides
And yet, cold blood is what it was
Only the wretched hope
Laid within our bloody grasp
The once ideal promise
Captivated our fragile hearts
Nevertheless, all decays
Into that tale told in the past
Life leaks its own hidden wounds
Never knowing if we'll return
— Layune, Oct 12, 2009
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seabhac
16 years 8 months ago
Welcome Layune
Layune
16 years 7 months ago
hi