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Layune
Jan 28, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A Lusting Crave

May I clearly bestow upon your lips
The unforgivable kiss,
To steal,
The untouched virgin lips
— Layune, Jan 28, 2010

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Region, Country: California, United Sates, USA

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DimondDivinity

16 years 4 months ago

very nice, but you should

very nice, but you should continue, it sounds like the start to a lovely poem that could go several ways Keyanna