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Music

When the world wanes away;
When the vicissitudes of tone take you through,
Making you feel something
Intangible--
Incomprehensible--
And yet it feels right.

When the words whispered in your ear of
Mesmerizing misery,
Eroding ecstasy,
Vicious veracity,
Meaning ciphered in a volume of vagueness
Condemning the oblivious and offering the open-minded a
Plethora of possibilities,
Fervently flow through the morose mind.

When the catharsis of one becomes revelation to another;
Revelation, the catharsis of another.

When the sonorous succession of sounds of serenity ring
And bring about an arc on your face,
Or cerulean pools upon those cerulean eyes,
Or anger in your heart,
Respite for your soul.

When you can close your eyes
And let your mind drift away,
Unperturbed by the rashness of reality,
Just for a moment.
Just for the moment.
That--
is Music.
— Adrian Kabigting, May 24, 2008

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poewriter58

18 years ago

Bravo

I'm sorry I missed this one. It is a beautiful example of what writing is. I cannot find anything I dislike about it. Your use of the language is commendable. I just found a problem however slight Your title. You've created this excellent poem and then give it a mundane title, please find something more deserving for this peom CHRYS
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Adrian Kabigting

17 years 11 months ago

yea the title was temporary,

yea the title was temporary, its weird. i couldnt think of a name once i finished it. and thanks for the wonderful comments.
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Layune

16 years 7 months ago

excellent!

I really do love this poem it captures the very essence of what music is that which I find to be so precious and exactly as you stated your language is something truly remarkable which adds on to flow of your poem Kudos! I love the style