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Dec 31, 2009
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A Firefly’s Escape
Misguided eyes
Wander through
Forest beats,
Searching
For a note of reassurance
That may indeed
Appease withered wings.
Wander through
Forest beats,
Searching
For a note of reassurance
That may indeed
Appease withered wings.
Yet, revisions within,
Claim the wisdom,
Out speak the truth,
And discredit inner beliefs.
All ,
Leaving no more
Than a breath’s residue
To heat
The disheartened soul.
The body,
Numb with despair
Raises fair stares,
Upon the dew on the grass
That plays with the heart,
And with a small shine
Pronounces, all is fine.
Then and there,
Blissfully happy,
With the attained lies,
Life takes flight,
Into the peace like stage
Of roaming mysteries,
Forgetting what one has done.
— Layune, Dec 31, 2009
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Arrow
16 years 4 months ago
I think I get the gist of this
Layune
16 years 4 months ago
I was wondering if it would