jamadarie

Member since August 15, 2009

Member for 16 years, 9 months

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Lessons: Players of Life

Posted Jul 11, 2010 · 9 lines · 4 critiques

Petals, petals cast their newness aside
velvety visions of beauty glistening with dew

Bright, aromatic tear shaped works of art
each with undefined flaws visible head on

No longer a part, of that which gets noticed
fading without regret, for they danced on air
lived out loud, felt the rain, greeted the sun

Free to be all they were intended to be
wonders, wonders these players of life

jamadarie’s timeline

August 2024
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15 years of membership
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August 2010
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July 2010
19 Mon

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @weirdelf
"Cheers, Jess, Praise helps no poet, have the courage and generousity to give critique."
19 Mon

Received a critique
on Lessons: Players of Life from @xena465
"Brilliant poem with great visionary. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell"
11 Sun

Received a critique
on Birthdays from @magics02
"Hello again lady friend This one flows great and I love the wording, however just a feedback on it from me if you do not mind. I would do away with the caps at the beginning of every line and I would format it to flow b…"
11 Sun

Posted a poem
Lessons: Players of Life
"Petals, petals cast their newness aside"
Open thread 9 lines
June 2010
20 Sun

Posted a poem
Birthdays
"Birthday wishes, dandy cakes, all lined up as family fakes"
Open thread 9 lines
17 Thu

Posted a poem
A Silly Willy Nilly Limmerick
" Wandering William wistfully wondered what willfully winning would be like He wondered so much, he fell out of touch and gave himself quite a fright"
Open thread 1 lines
September 2009
24 Thu

First critique offered
on "A rope is not a rope till it binds" by @Orphani
15 Tue

Highest posting month
September 2009 — 6 poems
August 2009
15 Sat

First publication
The Odyssey of a Lotus
14 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.