sunscreen

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how dare you?

Posted Feb 20, 2013 · 15 lines · 2 critiques

How dare you compare me to him?
The one who ruined everything we had.
The manipulative selfish asshole.

After all I've forgiven
My heart you've stricken
You leave me smitten.

Selflessly I was there
my love I despair
Hatred I declare.

I'm still waiting here
Behind the setting sun
where we once stayed.

Close the door to the world
blind my existence
Leave me distraught and angry.

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December 2024
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February 2013
21 Thu

Received a critique
on how dare you? from @Frenchf
"Hopeless against the inevitable well expressed"
20 Wed

Received a critique
on how dare you? from @jzarmel
"I like the write. Descriptive in every way concerning heartache."
20 Wed

Posted a poem
how dare you?
"How dare you compare me to him?"
Open thread 15 lines
05 Tue

Received a critique
on Gut rage from @Ian.T
"Confusion:- a way of generating clean green energy from people that run in circles.. La La ,Yours Sparrow PS:- Much cheaper than that Nu clear fusion, that they are trying to make.."
January 2013
27 Sun

Posted a poem
Lonesome
"Nights spent working"
Open thread 12 lines
December 2010
28 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2010
22 Tue

Posted a poem
Emotion
"Feel it in you"
Open thread 17 lines
April 2010
15 Thu

Highest posting month
April 2010 — 8 poems
March 2010
23 Tue

Most-discussed work
L.o.v.e.

35 critiques to date.
December 2009
29 Tue

First critique offered
on "she is lost in a bottle" by @Aireal Steed
29 Tue

First publication
Let me be the one who blocks out the sun
28 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.