Emotion

Feel it in you
Take a trip
Letting it control

Things they said
Tear you apart
They know what to say.

Face down in despair
Depressed and lost
Take it out on yourself

The hurt you feel
Pain concealed
Tears reveal.

Words crafted to kill
Feel them eat away
Venomous bite devours.

"Saying what should never be said, she lays you down. Cry not, I'll be there for you."
Alex owings.

— sunscreen, Jun 22, 2010

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xena465

15 years 11 months ago

Very strong write

They say words are only words, but they sure can hurt very deeply. I love it Alex. Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

sunscreen

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you :) Yes indeed

Thank you :) Yes indeed words, can bring out the worst in people, but physical actions can too.

magics02

15 years 11 months ago

I agree with you Sun

Real good write friend and missed reading you. Where you at on a long summer vacation? Why not visit in chat and lend us a laugh or two. Miss ya guy Love at ya Mona

sunscreen

15 years 11 months ago

Been spending all of my time

Been spending all of my time away from the house, working on my tan, hanging out with my woman, just living it up while I can, I only have one more summer left.