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Jan 24, 2010
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In the end there is a beginning
With me there is a starting
The middle is vague, ending blank
A sad departing.
To feel that prickle at feet
A sickle that cuts the wheat
Mind, and soul tickling to the beat
Conundrums in my sleep
I awake to hear the weep
influencing curling in your seat
Drop down on one knee
Look as far as I can see
The facial expression of glee.
In the end simple beginnings meet
Grinning from cheek to cheek
Let me wake to the sun burning my ending
Bringing forth my beginning
Sending out pillars of completion
The middle is vague, ending blank
A sad departing.
To feel that prickle at feet
A sickle that cuts the wheat
Mind, and soul tickling to the beat
Conundrums in my sleep
I awake to hear the weep
influencing curling in your seat
Drop down on one knee
Look as far as I can see
The facial expression of glee.
In the end simple beginnings meet
Grinning from cheek to cheek
Let me wake to the sun burning my ending
Bringing forth my beginning
Sending out pillars of completion
— sunscreen, Jan 24, 2010
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Critiques
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 4 months ago
IF this is a faith based poem than make it bold!
sunscreen
16 years 4 months ago
Intresting perspective.
Aireal Steed
16 years 4 months ago
is your first stanza talking
sunscreen
16 years 4 months ago
Not really
Aireal Steed
16 years 4 months ago
=)