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sunscreen
sunscreen
Jan 08, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The passion we share

The passion we share
Stare changing to sinister glare
sitting in that chair

The smell of your hair
You tease its just not fair
Take time to show how I care

When we embrace like bears
Movements cause me to swear
darling we make the perfect pair
Oh the passion that we share

— sunscreen, Jan 08, 2010

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Dark_Death

16 years 4 months ago

i like it, its touching and

i like it, its touching and has good emotion in it. i read on a cupple other of your work and i like them alot. this 1 pops out at me the most (not that i looked at them all.. yet =P ) but its just a personal thing i love rhymes (not that it matters its most important to do your own thing, picture the world if we all did the same thing.. dull... hehehe), to me it makes everything catchy. still your work is good and this one may be my favorite so far. still got some more to read though =) good work
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 4 months ago

Thanks :)

I appreciate it, I really like this one, I wrote it for the girl I'm currently with.