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Jan 01, 2010
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I won't lie
I won't lie
This starts with a torn heart,
emotions bleeding out
cry of pain.
Watching unable to care
Did you ever?
Walk out of my life
Eyes of distortion
blinded by vanity?
Whoring yourself
Coldness of heart
Where did this start?
I am where it ends.
I will progress into happiness
I will not forget the pain caused
I will not faulter I will not fold.
I will move on as the days go forward, and progresss
This starts with a torn heart,
emotions bleeding out
cry of pain.
Watching unable to care
Did you ever?
Walk out of my life
Eyes of distortion
blinded by vanity?
Whoring yourself
Coldness of heart
Where did this start?
I am where it ends.
I will progress into happiness
I will not forget the pain caused
I will not faulter I will not fold.
I will move on as the days go forward, and progresss
— sunscreen, Jan 01, 2010
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Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 5 months ago
your poem
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
If you say so buddy :)