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sunscreen
sunscreen
Mar 23, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

L.o.v.e.

Meaning forever together
Uniting of heart and mind
Tolerance of their faults.

Heart and soul entwined
Devotion unrelenting
Consistency eternal.

Soul mates
Completely understanding
Companions till end comes.

Never fading or deteriorating
Unable to function without
Sensing when hurt.

"Night meets dawn all because of you, I wouldn't be half the man I am today if we hadn't met glances that day. The smile you gave made me melt on the inside. The only thought that came to mind was; Eternal"
Blake Darkwood.

— sunscreen, Mar 23, 2010

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sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Haha

Nice pun, and not to worry, the stars mean nothing to me mate, rate them as you feel they deserve, its the words I care about :)
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

Sincere

but hopelessly romantic. well written. Cheers, Jess, Screw copyright, my poetry belongs to the world, no charge, property is theft. But an acknowledgment might be nice.
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Not hopeless, as there is

Not hopeless, as there is hope for us all. Romantic I accept, but never hopeless, for as long as I breathe I'll write my words of love, and hate, then share them with the world.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 2 months ago

well said!

I like your response more than your poem Cheers, Jess, Screw copyright, my poetry belongs to the world, no charge, property is theft. But an acknowledgment might be nice.
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paparazii

16 years 2 months ago

Jess

Jess, you're always unto people ha, come on--that's a lovely poem. By the way, is that really you on that profile photo--shld gut those mustache and beard, that's what causes the------? Cheers
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Can’t say anymore than

Can't say anymore than that Alex except...Superb. Rosina xena465
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks :)

I always enjoy your visits to my page mum. Ninjas been very mean lately, she hates my older brother who came to visit us from Washington state. So we've had to put her in the cat carrier so she behaves.
xena465

xena465

16 years 2 months ago

Oh dear!!!

Poor Ninjas. And your brother too of course. Cats have very strong senses, especially ones that are not afraid to show their dislike, as Ninjas does. I'm betting that your brother doesn't like her and she knows this and this is her way of saying "I don't like you either!" Rosina xena465
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

yup yup, she told he

yup yup, she told he straight up don't mess with me, or I'll do you in. It seems though she shares the same dislikes that I do. Seeing as I dislike my older brother quite a bit.
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

nice

I really like this poem. You just happened to write it on my birthday. like it Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

Thanks..

Thanks by the way you broken shy and silent rain are the reasons I started posting. Thanks for that to. Just thought you and the girls should know that Love, Alice Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

You broken skye and silent-rain

Are the reasons I started posting my poems. Just wanted to say thanks. Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

I saw

Your guys posts and thought hey if they have the courage to post their powems then i should be able to to. So i did and i just want to say thanks for giving me the courage to post. Get it now? Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

Great one sunblocker

I really liked your thinking and the way this one read. On your last line the word though should that have been thought? Seren is really helping you along I see, good job and keep up the good work. Love, Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.
Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Sunblocker

LOL little bit hard to comment when i am looking for the wrong account ... great poem and I have to say I love your reply to Jess as well shows a lot of fire in your belly I didnt realise you changed your moniker lol love JayCee
Alice Ember

Alice Ember

16 years 2 months ago

Thats good to know :D

Carrying your own battle scars is a sign of your own strength. Carrying others battle scars is a sign of your very soul.
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

love

Out of all the many Four letter words I am aware of, I only like four… LOVE, LOVE, LOVE and LOVE Your words are astoundingly lovely But they encompass Only one facet Of love… Recall the moment you were born Your mom was your unknown But most loved love Well done as you share Your love with all, Without love The world There would be no wherewithal. LOVED BY ONE AND ALL
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paparazii

16 years 2 months ago

Grea piece

Great piece of work, sure did enjoyed it and it tells--straight and hearty.
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 2 months ago

Nice Poem enjoyed reading it

Only if love was really like that. Love is though a lot of work with no appreciation. Had not met you before, welcome to Neopoet. ~~~~~~~~~ If you don't like it, can't talk about it, then write about it. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

You know me, as “The one

You know me, as "The one who blocks out the sun" I had a name changes as my previous title was a mouthful, and I didn't want to block out the healthy rays. Thank you for your comment :)
sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 2 months ago

No it was verbatim: The one

No it was verbatim: The one who blocks out the sun, or as Nina refers to me, Mr. Longest pen name ever. Most people called me Sunblock/sunblocker, or Alex.
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magics02

16 years 2 months ago

What is your name now sun??

Now is it broken or sun blocker or one who blocks the sun. I read about 10 of yours with all different names LOL Great write also here Love Mona Learn to live, learn to forgive. Life is too short.