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RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison
Member since May 17, 2010
Member for 16 years
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People Always Leave
meeting and falling in love
fighting until push comes to shove
crying until you have had enough
feeling as though anything can be achived
things escalate until neither of you are pleased
trying to pick up the pieces as you grieve
seeing someone everyday for all that time
you whole life changes at the drop of a dime
someone you love has just finised their climb
the feeling that you will never be rejected
sometimes feeling and others not feeling accepted
you hit that point when you feel all together neglected
he wanted to be here, he wanted to stay
she couldnt take it anymore, had to get away
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whether we or they wanted it or not.......
God has taken them away
this is what i want to say
my opinion will never faulter or sway
because.........
PEOPLE ALWAYS LEAVE
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5 years of membership
- September 2012
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10 MonReceived a critique
on People Always Leave from @Barbara Writes
"nice flow, i like how the title and theme came into perspective at the ending. the cliches are well used though i agree with whats already said by Beau. your poetic talent shines in this piece." -
10 MonReceived a critique
on People Always Leave from @Barbara Writes
"nice flow, i like how the title and theme came into perspective at the ending. the cliches are well used though i agree with whats already said by Beau. your poetic talent shines in this piece." - December 2011
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24 SatReceived a critique
on People Always Leave from @the_fool
"lots of typos in there, but that's easily fixed. the line- 'sometimes feeling and others not feeling accepted' confuses me. maybe a word was left out? good piece, tho. so nullus anxietas the_fool" -
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16 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
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- May 2010
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23 SunFirst critique offered
on "Age Is JuSt" by @loved
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22 SatFirst publication
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16 SunJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 6 days later.
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15 SatHighest posting month
May 2010 — 5 poems
About Me
About me
I am who i am, i do what i do, i love who and what i love, and i want who or what i want, im TOOOOOO honest, almost to the point of being rude, and i love the person that i am. I have been writing poetry since i was 7 years old (13yrs). My whole family is full of artists, my mother writes childrens books, although i dont believe that she has sent any out to be published yet, my brothers are lyricists and musicians and vocalists, and my sisters are all some form or visual artists, whether it be tattoo artist or painter etc. My family is my world, for without them i wouldnt be the person that i am today. I have my faults just like everybody else, and i accept the fact that as much as i may not like them, i know that without my faults, i would not be RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison!! <3
Location: New York, USA
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