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Liela
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Goodbye
We are about to say goodbye
Who knows what will happen before we see eachother again.
We have these few moments
Only a few moments...
You raise your voice
And you lose your temper.
You swear at me like I'm some lowly creature.
I'm afraid to walk out of this room
I hear doors slamming
I hear voices booming
I hear my heart breaking.
I'm afraid to say a word
The last ones made you curse
I dont know what I did...
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I want to take it back.
I see your eyes flashing
I see your jaw clenching
I see the blackness in your eyes...
And soon we'll say goodbye.
We have these few moments
Our last memories of each other...
Don't you want them to be filled with love?
I dont know what I did...
I want to take it back.
You've made your mark
You've had your say
Now all I have to do...
Is say goodbye.
Liela’s timeline
- June 2026
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28 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- June 2022
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28 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- June 2021
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28 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
- July 2010
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11 SunReceived a critique
on Goodbye from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. I have a couple of suggestions for you. In these lines it might be better if you brake up a couple of the longer lines, like this: We are about to say goodbye Who knows what will happen before we see e…" -
11 Sun
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02 FriReceived a critique
on Let's pretend from @Sinbadthesailorman
"1st Stanza A little to Negative without even a wisp of positive except for it being there. Note: This is only my preferred Taste when dealing with the positive or negative that they are neutral or positive. I like the n…" -
02 Fri
- June 2010
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10 ThuReceived a critique
on There is a secret from @judyanne
"lovely write - and you're not alone, we all know there is a secret we don't know. the people you're talking about think they've found it, but i don't believe they have really, and don't try to pretend - i really like th…" -
10 Thu
- May 2010
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15 SatHighest posting month
May 2010 — 6 poems
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08 SatFirst critique offered
on "the weird stage" by @billie
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07 FriFirst publication
Running Away
About Me
About me
16, new poet
Location: Britain
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Goodbye
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Let's pretend
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There is a secret
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My daddy loves me
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I'm still that little girl
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I am Home
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My Sanctuary
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Don"t look back
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Trust in me
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Running Away
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