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the weird stage

it seems i've reached
a stage where
few answers dwell

no one to follow
and no one to ask

none to blame
and none to shame

the space is filled
with an eery feeling
the loneliness
a force,
all its own
a means of some sort...
but to what...?

i wonder
what will follow,
if anything at all?
where does it lead,
if anywhere at all?

why are we here?
where do we go?
and are we meant
to be where we are?

— billie, May 08, 2010

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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

what a sweet poem

Hello Billie welcome to Neo, well you have done a fine job with this its wonderful, now i am very worldly also as you see so is rosina, we will help you as your questions have been answered you are supposed to be with us! If you need help come to find us we are always here to help, right rosi? shirley harrison
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I am glad I found myself

I am glad I found myself here via Robert's poem. It's an interesting twist of fate that poets speak one language. In our loneliness, aloneness, we feel our all-one-ness. Welcome. I look forward to seeing how you answer your questions in your forthcoming poems. ~A "If you think you're free, there's no escape possible." ~ Ram Dass
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billie

16 years 1 month ago

thank you shirley and

thank you shirley and kaliashana for your reception. takes a bit off the edge of that 1st post, i appreciate it.
hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

nice start

nice start my friend, keep it up