Trust in me

a very sincere love poem, with plenty of feeling. well done you! Tim

You obviously love Kyle very much. I think this would read better if you brought the long lines down...just a suggestion... I can’t promise that I’ll never let you down, but I’ll always be the one picking u up after you fall. I can’t promise that I’ll never make you cry, but I’ll always be the one wiping your tears. I can’t promise that you’ll never feel alone, but I promise that you’ll never have a reason to. I can’t promise that we will never drift apart, but i promise that I’ll never go too far. I can’t promise to always be your lover, but I promise that I will always love you. I’ll be your armour, your lover, your friend. I’ll be your conscience, your punching bag, an open shoulder. I’ll be your confidant, amigo, your partner in crime… I’ll always be there…just trust in me! I love you Kyle Rosina xena465

I can rate it now. It still has the same meaning with the edit, but easier to read and appreciate. Rosina xena465

Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible, "the alleged short-cut to knowledge, which is faith, is only a short-circuit destroying the mind." [Ayn Rand, Atlas Shrugged]

love poems are, my faviorite to read,I enjoyed yours emmincly. Watch for mine,it's comming soon. Hardcore.