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I'm still that little girl

When I was a little girl
I dreamt of castles
fancy dresses
and tiara's with pearls.

But most of all
A little girl's fantasy
I dreamt of a dashing prince
Who'd take me to a ball.

Time flew past
The dreams seemed gone
So did the little girl who scraped her knees
Time just passed way too fast.

I kissed some toads
And dragons too
I cant regret it
It led me to you

I never grew up
I still dream of tiara's and pearls
I know I have you
But I'm still that little girl...
— Liela, May 31, 2010

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Country/Region: Britain

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xena465

16 years ago

Hi Liela

It helps to get some feedback on your poetry if you reply to the comments on your previous poems. If you read my greeting to you on your homepage it may help you to make friends...nice poem. Rosina xena465
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Liela

16 years ago

Thanks

Yeah sorry have been terribly busy with exams, so i havnt really had time to reply to the comments. Will be sure to do so now. Hope all is well Rize