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kellustzall
Member since June 12, 2026
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Flood
The orange heaven far beyond my vision
I wonder what these gentle waves hold
Take me to the center cold will you?
Where the sun blue melts through
As I look around
All the corners glaring in daylight
Every videotape replayed and refound
If they were real, would I deny?
Conversations, time seems to leave behind
Flowing
Bless this meatsack of a ship
Splashing
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Still too far but there we go
Raining
Someone something, the distant shore will carry us
No worries, you can't make it either.
No worries, deep down there's an anchor.
No worries, it's just clean water.
Alrighty, thanks.
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- June 2026
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13 SatReceived a critique
on Summer Heat 2 (a second impression of the 2013 film Hawaii) from @Obadiah Grey
"This is a tad beyond me I'm afraid, I'm hoping its not, AI. Its given me a headache. Give 'em 'ell Kell. Obi." -
13 SatReceived a critique
on Summer Heat 2 (a second impression of the 2013 film Hawaii) from @Geezer
"that you didn't read the syllabus that says the poem must be 40 lines or less, if you want to cut it down to 40 or a close proximity. Re-submit it. Nice stuff, by the way. ~ Geezer." -
12 FriFirst publication
Summer Heat 2 (a second impression of the 2013 film Hawaii)
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12 FriPosted a poem
Summer Heat 2 (a second impression of the 2013 film Hawaii)
"Through the smearing lens into opaque walls" -
12 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
Vietnamese. 25. ESL. Im totally foreign to everything artistic and culturally English. Expect nothing but genuine guidance and critique.
Location: VNM
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