jtvash

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Anasthetic Claws

Posted Jun 5, 2010 · 16 lines

I write of dreams, and broken pasts

my tears mix with my ink

I write how nothing EVER lasts

and how it hurts to think

I scribble torment, pen to pads

My heartache starts to shrink

and now indifference comes on fast

and now I start to drink

The winter makes me blissfully numb

It's fitting for this cause

I take it in, and stricken dumb,

my brain gets put on pause.

And every night I do succumb

to Anasthetic Claws

Its sad, and yet it saves me from

depressions ugly jaws.

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June 2012
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June 2011
06 Mon

Joined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
June 2010
05 Sat

Posted a poem
Anasthetic Claws
"I write of dreams, and broken pasts"
Open thread 16 lines
04 Fri

Received a critique
on Routine from @scribbler
"good flow and meter.Sad subject I hope not based in fact.......scribbler"
04 Fri

Posted a poem
Routine
"A friend of mine, is in such pain,"
Open thread 20 lines
03 Thu

Received a critique
on Poison from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. The imagery is wonderful and dark. I think this poem deserves five stars and a spotlight nomination! Always, Cat"
03 Thu

Received a critique
on Poison from @mand
"I agree with Chrys. Love Mand xxx"
03 Thu

Received a critique
on To vandals: from @mand
"A very talented writer. Flow is impeccable, I particularly like the 3rd stanza, Although I find, a sign of life, within this tangled heap; a promise made by blade of knife carved in the wreckage deep. I think you'll go…"
03 Thu

Received a critique
on To vandals: from @Thulisile
"GREAT POEM , how I wish for them to read it."
03 Thu

Posted a poem
To vandals:
"The finishing has peeled away,"
Open thread 16 lines
February 2010
28 Sun

Received a critique
on Poison from @poewriter58
"Pefect rhyme and rythmn in this write. You have a lot of potential young man. Chrys"
15 Mon

Received a critique
on South from @poewriter58
"For that insight No it wasn't overboard I appreciate that you took the time have added you to my buddy list as I do enjoy reading your work Chrys"
15 Mon

Received a critique
on winter from @Ink Dragon
"I agree with almost everything Ross said: you have good rhythm for the most part, which makes your poetry a joy to read - or would make it that, if it wasn't for the spelling and grammar problems. Do stick to the tense…"
08 Mon

Critiqued
"Fly" by @Kailashana
"I forgot to rate your poem. I loved it."
08 Mon

Critiqued
"Fly" by @Kailashana
"I can tell you this much..Being an intelligent, analytical, and sensitive guy in a society of material possessions, sex, explosions, violence, and self gratification makes most alienate me and look upon me as a friend a…"
08 Mon

First critique offered
on "Fly" by @Kailashana
08 Mon

Posted a poem
Poison
"I would Finish any flagon"
Open thread 22 lines
January 2010
28 Thu

Posted a poem
Love/Jealousy
"You are honest."
Open thread 14 lines
27 Wed

Posted a poem
winter
"the shattered fragments of my heart"
Open thread 24 lines
25 Mon

Posted a poem
Untitled (this is my first true freeform, no rhyme scheme to speak of; just how i think on paper)
"The heavens opened up and cried, as an angel broke my heart;"
Open thread 6 lines
24 Sun

Posted a poem
South
"I flew towards the south"
Open thread 16 lines
17 Sun

Posted a poem
the Fire
"    A day will pass, without event"
Open thread 22 lines
16 Sat

Posted a poem
Jaded Sharks
"    Moments like this, often fleeting"
Open thread 17 lines
15 Fri

First publication
Snare
15 Fri

Posted a poem
Snare
"These lyrics, they will form a snare"
Open thread 8 lines
15 Fri

Highest posting month
January 2010 — 7 poems

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Anasthetic Claws

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Anasthetic Claws

on Routine from @scribbler

Routine

on Poison from @Candlewitch

on Poison from @mand

on To vandals: from @mand

on To vandals: from @Thulisile

To vandals:

on Poison from @poewriter58

on South from @poewriter58

on winter from @Ink Dragon

"Fly" by @Kailashana

"Fly" by @Kailashana

on "Fly" by @Kailashana

Poison

Love/Jealousy

winter

Untitled (this is my first true freeform, no rhyme scheme to speak of; just how i think on paper)

South

the Fire

Jaded Sharks

Snare

Snare

January 2010 — 7 poems

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