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Jun 05, 2010
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Anasthetic Claws
I write of dreams, and broken pasts
my tears mix with my ink
I write how nothing EVER lasts
and how it hurts to think
I scribble torment, pen to pads
My heartache starts to shrink
and now indifference comes on fast
and now I start to drink
The winter makes me blissfully numb
It's fitting for this cause
I take it in, and stricken dumb,
my brain gets put on pause.
And every night I do succumb
to Anasthetic Claws
Its sad, and yet it saves me from
depressions ugly jaws.
my tears mix with my ink
I write how nothing EVER lasts
and how it hurts to think
I scribble torment, pen to pads
My heartache starts to shrink
and now indifference comes on fast
and now I start to drink
The winter makes me blissfully numb
It's fitting for this cause
I take it in, and stricken dumb,
my brain gets put on pause.
And every night I do succumb
to Anasthetic Claws
Its sad, and yet it saves me from
depressions ugly jaws.
— jtvash, Jun 05, 2010
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