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Jaded Sharks

    Moments like this, often fleeting
    Hardly prove a thing
    But why then can't my heart stop beating
    Hard enough, to sting.
    I fall too hard, I fall to fast
    I'm told this is a fling
    I've heard these feelings seldom last
    and cut you down, mid swing
    
    I don't believe those jaded sharks
    they've all something to say
    They make their quips and snyde remarks
    but have they felt THIS way?
    they've surely not, or they'd confide
    that I should never stray
    from someone that can sole provide
    the sunlight in my day.

— jtvash, Jan 16, 2010

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poewriter58

16 years 4 months ago

JT

Well done . ahhh young love ( no I'm not making light of it) I'm just remembering when May I suggest that you do not use caps in mid sentence, I understand you want to stree a thought perhaps quotation marks Chrys