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To vandals:

The finishing has peeled away,
the walls stripped down and bare;
exposed too long, they've now decayed,
their rubble everywhere.

The floor has shattered, fragments gone,
the remnants hanging there;
impossible to tread upon,
unless with utmost care.

Although I find, a sign of life,
within this tangled heap;
a promise made by blade of knife
carved in the wreckage deep.

A vow to fix this broken place,
to stay and see it's keep.
Sweet irony, a bitter taste;
to vandals, vows are cheap.


— jtvash, Jun 03, 2010

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Thulisile

16 years ago

wonder

GREAT POEM , how I wish for them to read it.
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mand

16 years ago

A very talented writer. Flow

A very talented writer. Flow is impeccable, I particularly like the 3rd stanza, Although I find, a sign of life, within this tangled heap; a promise made by blade of knife carved in the wreckage deep. I think you'll go along way if you keep this up. Love Mand xxxxx