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Jun 03, 2010
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To vandals:
The finishing has peeled away,
the walls stripped down and bare;
exposed too long, they've now decayed,
their rubble everywhere.
The floor has shattered, fragments gone,
the remnants hanging there;
impossible to tread upon,
unless with utmost care.
Although I find, a sign of life,
within this tangled heap;
a promise made by blade of knife
carved in the wreckage deep.
A vow to fix this broken place,
to stay and see it's keep.
Sweet irony, a bitter taste;
to vandals, vows are cheap.
— jtvash, Jun 03, 2010
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Thulisile
16 years ago
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mand
16 years ago
A very talented writer. Flow