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Jan 25, 2010
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Untitled (this is my first true freeform, no rhyme scheme to speak of; just how i think on paper)
The heavens opened up and cried, as an angel broke my heart;
pouring down in sheets upon the ground, washing away any memories I could carry home.
Celestial beings slowly sighed, as the gusts blew us apart;
The wind was forceful, melancholy, and made me struggle for stability.
The two forces collided,
and in a storm of lement, regret, and disenchantment; we parted ways forever...
— jtvash, Jan 25, 2010
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Ross Hamilton Hill
16 years 4 months ago
your poem
jtvash
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you so much! I love