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Feb 04, 2010
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Fly
Fly
I wasn't a whore until you met me
I placed my body on the line. you
were hanging
limp
finished and turned away. your
next conquest already in your little
black book of revisions. a cutting
edge is all that remains. poems
are not noble
in the light of day. poems
have nothing to say;
I cough up your memory. you taste
of a sticky sweetness,
and I probably need to file my nails. or
at least sharpen them.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaLfDnShEn0&feature=related
Woman ~ John Lennon
— Kailashana, Feb 04, 2010
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
The following comment could
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
Imagine
Orphani
16 years 4 months ago
Woman, I only know this. You
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
In truth, what kind of life
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
;-) A fearless man!~A
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Now, THAT’S scaring me.
RobertKnott
16 years 4 months ago
i cannot
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Lovely, Robert. Thank you.
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
I love the Poem
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I don’t see you as
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Ya know I read this one on
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Intrigue. Drama. Poets
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
I own all those movies …
bjp
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Merci, Brian.~A
seabhac
16 years 4 months ago
Whore is a state of mind
Mark
16 years 4 months ago
I do believe
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I think we are born with
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Seabhac. I’ll
jtvash
16 years 4 months ago
I can tell you this
Lunegirl
16 years 4 months ago
some people say that sarcasm
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
You’re adorable when
jtvash
16 years 4 months ago
I forgot to rate your poem.
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Cool beans.~A
Lunegirl
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Annawhat a wonderful
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Yes. We are
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
You are? Well, I won’t
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
I remember that! I’m THAT
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Well, it’s hard to keep
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
The bow I was referring to
Diatom Shells
16 years 4 months ago
Oh Anna,
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Crawling is the opportune
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Glad you understood the
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Tell you what, you can keep
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Much love Kal.Deep abiding
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
Keep those nails sharp.
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
p.s.