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Jan 24, 2010
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South
I flew towards the south
on wings of hope and expectation,
carried on the winds of love
to swiftly reach my destination
Gliding in, I landed boldy
reached her side, no hestiation
finding out, my wings had melted
in the rays of condemnation
Over eager, did I journey
Certain so, of feeling deeply
overzealous, never worried
that this time would end so cheaply
now my Wings Can never lift me
and the winds don't blow beneath me
now my heart and soul are trapped here
even as my body leaves me...
on wings of hope and expectation,
carried on the winds of love
to swiftly reach my destination
Gliding in, I landed boldy
reached her side, no hestiation
finding out, my wings had melted
in the rays of condemnation
Over eager, did I journey
Certain so, of feeling deeply
overzealous, never worried
that this time would end so cheaply
now my Wings Can never lift me
and the winds don't blow beneath me
now my heart and soul are trapped here
even as my body leaves me...
— jtvash, Jan 24, 2010
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poewriter58
16 years 4 months ago
JT
jtvash
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you! I appreciate you
poewriter58
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you