itzhak bareket

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today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket .

Posted Jun 5, 2011 · 27 lines · 6 critiques

you know , today ,
i"m not exactely the same man
that i vas yesterday .
it"s different .
i mean i am i ,
but , with some 35 . 575 yesterdays
acumulated , colected in myself , in me ,
plus today ,
that tomorrow will be
an other yesterday ,
if meanwhile i shall not leave here
and co away for ever .

all my day"s,
all my night"s ,

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-the white ,the black ,the full coloured ,-
gave me a lot of oppurtunites ,
plenty chances :
I was a prince , i was a king , a vinner ,a caesar ,
a looser , a baggar ,a worker , a soldier, a fighter , a prisonier ,
and after all , free ,a so called free senior cityzien .

it's not so bad ...no reason to be sad......
tomorrow morning , i shall prepare my breakfast :
black bread to eat , water to drink .
and could be- between you and me -
that i shall fall again in love .
who knows ,every thing could be ,

copyright : itzhak bareket 2011 .

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June 2011
18 Sat

Critiqued
"can you hear me cry" by @faithmairee
"....i do identifay my self with your cry.... i can ear it very well and if you stil have some comunication problems , i will join you and will cry together.HE must listen and must help .is HIS duty.best wishes , itzhak."
16 Thu

Critiqued
" places we have yet to go" by @Kailashana2
"dear master , i'm deeply touched . it's a great joy for me to read and reread your poem .doesn't mean that i understood exactely every single magic word , but i feel the music , and i'm happy that you gave me the chance…"
06 Mon

Received a critique
on today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket . from @Kailashana2
"Oy vey! all my tomorrows are my yesterdays' todays. no wonder I can't find a straight man in a bale of strawmen. ~A nice 2cu again and again if u know what i mean are"
06 Mon

Received a critique
on today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket . from @Lenny of Cohen
"read! Well done sir! Namaste, Lenny"
05 Sun

Posted a poem
today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket .
"you know , today ,"
Open thread 27 lines
April 2011
19 Tue

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2010
19 Mon

Received a critique
on J A K A R A N D A by : itzhak bareket . from @shirley harrison
"I believe this could be a really nice poem if you tidy it up abit! I love your passion for this Beautiful tree! much love i will sneak back to see it soon! shirley harrison"
18 Sun

Critiqued
"Daddy's Rose Garden" by @magics02
"itzhak bareket ....the flowers are here , i can see , smell and enjoy them.... thank you dear daughter ...tell your father please , that i love him , and i learned from him and his beloved daughter , a lot . best wishes…"
18 Sun

Critiqued
"My Ecstasy" by @Candlewitch
"itzhak bareket ...it sound perhaps , too familiar , but from my side , now , after i just finished to read some poems written by you , and all the comments-blessed rainS !- from your friends , i've got the feeling , tha…"
18 Sun

Posted a poem
J A K A R A N D A by : itzhak bareket .
"                      today ,"
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17 Sat

Received a critique
on L U L L A B Y by : ITZHAK BAREKET . from @Candlewitch
"Very profound. My favorite lines: now….it seems to me that i found it…i got it! she want me to sing…..to sing for her the lullaby song , that she used to sing for me . when i was her’s little first born boy , and i crie…"
17 Sat

Received a critique
on " M O O N " by ; itzhak bareket . from @Candlewitch
"I find one word titles to be very powerful. Language use is good except for a few mistakes: high (on) the sky [in] and when you like (an) yellow melon [a] the pacing is good and the theme does appeal to me. It is a uniq…"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on " L E T T E R " by: itzhak bareket. from @Candlewitch
"I like the title, pacing and theme. Language usage is good and it all comes together nicely at the end. My favorite lines: OH MY G O D help me to find the adequate answers, the wright way… Always, Cat"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on t i m e o u t by:itzhak bareket from @Candlewitch
"Timeout is a very good title. I enjoyed the theme. Remember to use a space after a comma, before the next word. My favorite lines: how to sing all the seasons, -summer,fall,winter, spring- what to sing. Always, Cat"
16 Fri

Received a critique
on H I B A from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. I loved the imagery this brought to my mind. My favorite lines are: menwhile,her fingers become warm,and so do i, i start feeling much better,warmblooded, not just in my spine,in my heart too… Always…"
15 Thu

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L U L L A B Y by : ITZHAK BAREKET .
"      ...after  mother ' s   death,"
Open thread 27 lines
15 Thu

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July 2010 — 9 poems
13 Tue

Posted a poem
" M O O N " by ; itzhak bareket .
"                     moon"
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12 Mon

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CORPORAL F R I T Z . by : itzhak bareket .
"   Corporal  Fritz , was a good  looking  young  man.  He was always well dressed in his military clothes and  has a certain charming smjle on his face. He  used to bring  us good food, fine wine, excelent  cigarettes and  bitter-swite  black chocolate."
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F I N N A T T by:itzhak bareket .
"          f i n n a t t ,"
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s m i l i n g l a d y by:itzhak bareket .
". .., she  entered  now..."
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06 Tue

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" L E T T E R " by: itzhak bareket.
"   ...i know,believe me,i know,"
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05 Mon

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t i m e o u t by:itzhak bareket
"to sigal"
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02 Fri

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H I B A
"...she is touching my back from  low-side to head,"
Open thread 16 lines
June 2010
25 Fri

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"L I G H T N A P " by:itzhak bareket.
"     ...this  small ljght  nap"
Open thread 24 lines
24 Thu

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"SANTA CESAREA" by:itzhak bareket.
"....WE WANDERED DAY"
Open thread 37 lines
April 2010
25 Sun

Critiqued
"My Auntie Mona Magic" by @ChoirBoy2323
"...it's a nice,a little bit naive-poem.ease to read it,charming to remember it. thank you. itzhak bareket."
25 Sun

First critique offered
on "My Auntie Mona Magic" by @ChoirBoy2323
20 Tue

First publication
BEEP! by:itzhak bareket.
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"can you hear me cry" by @faithmairee

" places we have yet to go" by @Kailashana2

on today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket . from @Kailashana2

on today , yesterday , tomorrow , by: itzhak bareket . from @Lenny of Cohen

One year of membership

on J A K A R A N D A by : itzhak bareket . from @shirley harrison

"Daddy's Rose Garden" by @magics02

"My Ecstasy" by @Candlewitch

on L U L L A B Y by : ITZHAK BAREKET . from @Candlewitch

on " M O O N " by ; itzhak bareket . from @Candlewitch

on " L E T T E R " by: itzhak bareket. from @Candlewitch

on t i m e o u t by:itzhak bareket from @Candlewitch

on H I B A from @Candlewitch

July 2010 — 9 poems

"My Auntie Mona Magic" by @ChoirBoy2323

on "My Auntie Mona Magic" by @ChoirBoy2323

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