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J A K A R A N D A by : itzhak bareket .


                      today ,
     - this  early   morning -
 usually    i  smile   and  chat    with    my
       beloved    friend ,  but   this time.....

                     O.... NO !

  totaly    shocked , i discovered
 that   my    lovely-love ,
 my   brilliant    huge   crown
 of    violet    beauty ,
   d i s a p p e a r e d !

      NO   MORE    THERE , LEFT ,
          F I N I S H E D  ! 

  om  the    nude   branches   of   my
       J A  K A R A N D A
               tree ,
       no   more    flowers .

   they    died ,  last    night
      all   of   them  ,
          together  .

    now , they   are   down ,
 on   the   cold   stones
 of   the    pavement ,
      like   a  splendid
   unique    carpet.....
— itzhak bareket, Jul 18, 2010

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shirley harrison

15 years 10 months ago

Dear Itzhak

I believe this could be a really nice poem if you tidy it up abit! I love your passion for this Beautiful tree! much love i will sneak back to see it soon! shirley harrison
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itzhak bareket

15 years 10 months ago

j a k a r a n d a

itzhak bareket dear SHIRLEY , first , let me thank you for your so kind and useful comment . i do appreciated very much. second , i enjoy to look at your little picture . you are looking GREAT . best wishes , itzhak .