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Jul 02, 2010
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H I B A
...she is touching my back from low-side to head,
and vice-versa,head-low-side,
with her long,beautiful cold fingers...
she is walking with them on my spine,
like a musician on his piano:
sometimes there are painful sounds,
sometimes really, very"dolorosa",
SOMETIMES ANDANTE, CALM, GENTLY
and sometimes,presto,vivace,allegro,full of joy.
menwhile,her fingers become warm,and so do i,
i start feeling much better,warmblooded,
not just in my spine,in my heart too...
she gave me a "phisyotherapy" treatment,,
her name is H I B A...wich means in arabic language,
"G I F T"
H I B A.
and vice-versa,head-low-side,
with her long,beautiful cold fingers...
she is walking with them on my spine,
like a musician on his piano:
sometimes there are painful sounds,
sometimes really, very"dolorosa",
SOMETIMES ANDANTE, CALM, GENTLY
and sometimes,presto,vivace,allegro,full of joy.
menwhile,her fingers become warm,and so do i,
i start feeling much better,warmblooded,
not just in my spine,in my heart too...
she gave me a "phisyotherapy" treatment,,
her name is H I B A...wich means in arabic language,
"G I F T"
H I B A.
— itzhak bareket, Jul 02, 2010
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