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Daddy's Rose Garden
My father, planted a rose garden for me
Scents of pure love, plentiful colors to see
Toiled his hands both day and night
Beneath earths soil, many roots of color
blooming into the mornings sunlight
Gentleness of care, he tenders the bush
for a rose is an art, a splendor of looks
He planted this rose garden just for me
to share with all, pure and tenderly
Red and white, the peach and the yellow
good morning, my most precious petals
They're a wonder to me, I watch them grow
for my gardener tends to them well you know
I love my roses, so fragrant they smell
the love of my father, he planted them well
Admiration for a rose, is love indeed
fragrants to soften a warm summer breeze
Scents so sweet, I just want to say
I love you Daddy, for planting them your way
no finer is the rose, that is planted with love
Showers in colors, heaven scents from above
a sight and the fragrance, so happy with glee
Thank you dear father, my gardener is He.
mms 7.19.10.
To my father who planted a beautiful garden of roses on July 4th and how sweet it lis.
Critiques
magics02
16 years ago
I know
faithmairee
16 years ago
Lovely Poem To You Dad
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Faith
Nordic cloud
16 years ago
Oh I can smell their scent, hmmmm!
magics02
16 years ago
Yes that is correct
Bonitaj
16 years ago
Hello Mona!
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you dear Boni
scribbler
16 years ago
garden
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you Scribe
Dennis Go
16 years ago
Awesome!
magics02
16 years ago
Thank you for your visit
itzhak bareket
16 years ago
love garden
magics02
16 years ago
I thank you so much
Lil Z
16 years ago
Beautiful poem Mona!
magics02
16 years ago
Lil Z I write to thee
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