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t i m e o u t by:itzhak bareket

to sigal ...it takes some time until we learn, and much more until we know, what to do, how to do, with whom to do... how to sing all the seasons, -summer,fall,winter, spring- what to sing. how to come in, how to get out, it takes time all theese about... and when we learned what to do and we know how to do and we find with whom to do, -how to be in, how to go out, the time is out...
— itzhak bareket, Jul 05, 2010

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

15 years 10 months ago

hello

Timeout is a very good title. I enjoyed the theme. Remember to use a space after a comma, before the next word. My favorite lines: how to sing all the seasons, -summer,fall,winter, spring- what to sing. Always, Cat