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"L I G H T N A P " by:itzhak bareket.

     ...this  small ljght  nap
          that together
                         we    share
                   after
             we   made  love,
                    and   we,
        -every   one   in   his   way -
               gave   each   other
                       our
                  seeds, 

        iis   a   really   heaven
                  dream,
                 unique
           in    quality
            and   needs .

   what   is   sweeter   than   sweet
          and,   not   in   a glass
      neither   on   a  dish ,
   could   not   be   served ,
  could    not   be   delivered ?

             this   little
         marvelous ,
             so   fragile
            light    nap...
— itzhak bareket, Jun 25, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

15 years 11 months ago

Hello Itzhak...

This is so warm and lovely... The little nap... the afterglow moments... You speak of them so well... Your poem has a gentle, sensual touch. Simply delightful! Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti
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itzhak bareket

15 years 11 months ago

LOVE

itzhak bareket DEAR RAVEN, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND LINES. THIS IS ONE PIECE FROM MY PROJECTED BOOK OF POEMS,"PRESS CONFERENCE". MY ADRESS:ITZHAK BAREKET,LEVANON STR.79A.TEL-AVIV,69345,ISRAEL.E-mail: [email protected] invited any time. BEST WISHES, ITZHAK.
xena465

xena465

15 years 11 months ago

I'm with Raven

Wow! Romance isn’t dead after all Itzhak. Okay, a little detailed but with panache...wonderful Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell