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"L I G H T N A P " by:itzhak bareket.

     ...this  small ljght  nap
          that together
                         we    share
                   after
             we   made  love,
                    and   we,
        -every   one   in   his   way -
               gave   each   other
                       our
                  seeds, 

        iis   a   really   heaven
                  dream,
                 unique
           in    quality
            and   needs .

   what   is   sweeter   than   sweet
          and,   not   in   a glass
      neither   on   a  dish ,
   could   not   be   served ,
  could    not   be   delivered ?

             this   little
         marvelous ,
             so   fragile
            light    nap...
— itzhak bareket, Jun 25, 2010

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 1 month ago

Hello Itzhak...

This is so warm and lovely... The little nap... the afterglow moments... You speak of them so well... Your poem has a gentle, sensual touch. Simply delightful! Gentle regards, Raven-Shakti
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itzhak bareket

16 years 1 month ago

LOVE

itzhak bareket DEAR RAVEN, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR KIND LINES. THIS IS ONE PIECE FROM MY PROJECTED BOOK OF POEMS,"PRESS CONFERENCE". MY ADRESS:ITZHAK BAREKET,LEVANON STR.79A.TEL-AVIV,69345,ISRAEL.E-mail: [email protected] invited any time. BEST WISHES, ITZHAK.
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

I'm with Raven

Wow! Romance isn’t dead after all Itzhak. Okay, a little detailed but with panache...wonderful Xena Quote: Science is what you know; philosophy is what you don't know. - Bertrand Russell

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