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Jun 25, 2010
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"L I G H T N A P " by:itzhak bareket.
...this small ljght nap
that together
we share
after
we made love,
and we,
-every one in his way -
gave each other
our
seeds,
iis a really heaven
dream,
unique
in quality
and needs .
what is sweeter than sweet
and, not in a glass
neither on a dish ,
could not be served ,
could not be delivered ?
this little
marvelous ,
so fragile
light nap...
that together
we share
after
we made love,
and we,
-every one in his way -
gave each other
our
seeds,
iis a really heaven
dream,
unique
in quality
and needs .
what is sweeter than sweet
and, not in a glass
neither on a dish ,
could not be served ,
could not be delivered ?
this little
marvelous ,
so fragile
light nap...
— itzhak bareket, Jun 25, 2010
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Ravenshakti
16 years 1 month ago
Hello Itzhak...
itzhak bareket
16 years 1 month ago
LOVE
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
I'm with Raven
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