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ChoirBoy2323
Apr 25, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

My Auntie Mona Magic

My Auntie Mona is all but here.
She gone like a wind so near and dear.
She left without a trace.
Her loving grace.
I love her much as she left this site,
Soon we will see her bright light.
A light for kindness and returning fervor.
As I am  sending my last courier.
I love my Auntie Mona so much.
We all just make a clever bunch.


choir boy

— ChoirBoy2323, Apr 25, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

I’m glad it’s a question

I'm glad it's a question of technology and not faith. Good Morning Mona! ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
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ChoirBoy2323

16 years 1 month ago

RE:kailashana

This is not Mona. I am her nephew. I miss her on here. And hope to see her soon. She is faithful and has a very kindred spirit. Thank you for your concern and thought. I am the one she wrote the poem, "THE MAGNIFICO MATTHEW" She still writes her fanatastic poems even though she cannot enter this site. Her poems inspire her to be a kind person. She is the one that inspired me to be a very kind and noble person. Thank you for your concern. I am also a member here. Sincerely, Matthew
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Lol Matthew… I can follow

Lol Matthew... I can follow your avatar, poem and remember that she has a nephew here at Neo, and remember the poem about her nephew. Now, would you please replay my message to her? Thanks, and us older folk are still *with it*, contrary to youthful opinion. Ha! ~A "The plain man is familiar with blindness and deafness, and knows from his everyday experience that the look of things is influenced by his senses, but it never occurs to him to regard the whole world as a creation of his senses." ~ Ernst Mach
ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 1 month ago

Awwh

You are so sweet. Mona and I are good friends and she talks about you dearly. She loves you and knows you love her. We all miss her and hope she returns soon. That is a great little poem. Good job. And keep singing okay? Mona's friend and yours, Danielle.[Dani]
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shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

Magic Mona i miss too!

Lovely words, and i hope magic Mona does return! shirley harrison
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ChoirBoy2323

16 years 1 month ago

RE:Danielle

Thanks alot. She will be back soon. I just hope that she could be able to create more friendships than she already has.
ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 1 month ago

Well

Your aunt could have all the friends she wants. She has an amazing personality and a beautiful heart. God really has plans for her. She's got lots of friends and will continue to make more. Whether all her friendships work out or not, we don't know. Only God knows but he's got a plan for her buddy. Pray for her (: Danielle.