Heading South

Member since November 21, 2009

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No worries, No Vanity, No Inequality

Posted Mar 19, 2010 · 8 lines · 6 critiques

Yes slip to your places of principled care,
to the poorest and freest and loveliest there.

For locked in your box on a single road,
on the path to adventure as onwards you strode,

you ate of forgiveness, forgiveness of self,
and picked up the chalice of sensual health;

the not knowing the patches of baldness of bare,
the rocklands of shadow that watched for you there.

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March 2012
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Received a critique
on Carousel from @Candlewitch
"I'm in complete agreement with Cloudthings assesment of your well penned poem. And I loved the last line! always, Cat"
20 Tue

Received a critique
on Carousel from @Cloudthings
"Lovely work. Transported me well into that delicious space only literary competence can take you. The brevity also impressed me. The last line wraps it up wonderfully Cheers A"
December 2011
25 Sun

Received a critique
on Christmas Day from @Seren
"I had a quiet christmas day and It was rather nice for a change I hope you and yours had a great day Its nice to be back :) JC xox"
November 2010
20 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
March 2010
19 Fri

Posted a poem
No worries, No Vanity, No Inequality
"Yes slip to your places of principled care,"
Open thread 8 lines
08 Mon

Posted a poem
Down by the river
"Observe the wind rattling"
Open thread 18 lines
February 2010
20 Sat

Posted a poem
Off the cuff
"I am the wind"
Open thread 29 lines
December 2009
15 Tue

Highest posting month
December 2009 — 6 poems
02 Wed

Most-discussed work
Daylight

12 critiques to date.
November 2009
21 Sat

First critique offered
on "Fix it. Fix it Fix it Fix it !!" by @G.D.K
21 Sat

First publication
Prototypes of the second floor
20 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.