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Another Haiku

The sparrow trapped in
the departure lounge dreams each
skylight is the sun.
— Heading South, Feb 07, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

An Eagle holds earth trapped

An Eagle holds earth trapped in the shadowed depths of sunlight off the piers dont ask me why but everytime you write a Haiku they just come to me sorry, usually crap but was compelled to write it this time lol brilliant Daniel I love your Haiku love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x
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odd molly

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Daniel,To capture the

Dear Daniel, To capture the moment and translate it into words is an art. I love haiku for it reminds me that every moment is poetry. You write beautifully and you paint a picture of light and big silver birds taking off against the infinite blue sky. Hope and dreams and our journey through life. Your poem made me also think of spring, which right now is somewhere and a nightingale singing, and the mountains that lift the sky.. Yes , stunning ! love o molly
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 3 months ago

Dear all

Thank you so much for the beautiful haiku and kind comments. Peace, Daniel