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Heading South
Heading South
Jan 26, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Black Diamonds

Finally the cold snap
has arrived and capped the
black diamonds with ice.
— Heading South, Jan 26, 2010

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Niiiice.The black settles

Niiiice. The black settles in like mountains, sheets of ice move, glistening diamonds ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

glistening black

glistening black hills illuminated icecaps frozen in mind not even close to a haiku but thats what hit me after reading yours and annas lol brilliant write Daniel love and hugs Jayne x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

Who ya kiddin’ daughter!

Who ya kiddin' daughter! Your *haiku* is perfect. Congradulations!!! Thank you Daniel for your mountain of inspiration. ;-) Love U2 ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Omg really, shit I just

Omg really, shit I just wrote what hit me lol crazy business poetry, I am smiling moons here at the moment (((hugs))) biggest love Jayne-Chloe x x x
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne and Anna

Wow, glad to have provided you both with some inspiration. In return you have inspired me! Haiku dropped into consciousness; echoing like ripples in a pond. Much love, Daniel
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

frozen haiku eyes awareness

frozen haiku eyes awareness skates ice-blue skies drops in a bucket ;-) ~A http://living.oneindia.in/yoga-spirituality/anecdotes/2008/enlightenment-nun-chiyono-zen-story-151008.html "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 4 months ago

Hi Daniel...

can anyone join in??? Black Diamond Miners so many lose their lives for glittering rocks enjoyed!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 4 months ago

boghead coal, rich

boghead coal, rich veins diamonds in the making, eons black lungs, seeping blood ~A "What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal." Albert Pine