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Mar 19, 2010
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No worries, No Vanity, No Inequality
Yes slip to your places of principled care,
to the poorest and freest and loveliest there.
For locked in your box on a single road,
on the path to adventure as onwards you strode,
you ate of forgiveness, forgiveness of self,
and picked up the chalice of sensual health;
the not knowing the patches of baldness of bare,
the rocklands of shadow that watched for you there.
to the poorest and freest and loveliest there.
For locked in your box on a single road,
on the path to adventure as onwards you strode,
you ate of forgiveness, forgiveness of self,
and picked up the chalice of sensual health;
the not knowing the patches of baldness of bare,
the rocklands of shadow that watched for you there.
— Heading South, Mar 19, 2010
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Seren
16 years 2 months ago
WOW …I dont think I have
Heading South
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Jayne
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Good night Daniel. Sleep
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
hello
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I agree with all. Nice flow
Nicole Michaels
16 years 2 months ago
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