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Symbols

Bukowski had red-heads and cigars
Jeffers had hawks and stones
Hart Crane had the Brooklyn Bridge
to honour with his bones.

Ashberry had fine titles and awards
but nobody understood a word he said
except once when he was stoned
and stepped outside his head.

Now I look into that convex mirror
and see the first flecks of grey
and think to myself it is sometimes better
when there's nothing left to say.

Yet somehow I keep on writing
these bright symbols to define
the sudden moments of clarity
found deep within my mind.
— Heading South, Feb 05, 2010

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whitetea

whitetea

16 years 4 months ago

bravo

Poets often go without credit or being noticed. Like you, most of us will only write for ourselves. I adore this piece and the comparisons to some of the better known poets and how they fared. This is an incredible piece.
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Whitetea

Yes, poetry is often like unrequited love but rewarding nonetheless. Glad you like the write! Daniel
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Daniel

loved this one my friend I can see you taking a different direction ... I like ;) love and hugs Jayne-Chloe x x x
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Jayne

Yes, this is definitely a different angle! Glad you liked it and hope you are enjoying your rest! All the best, Daniel
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raskin

16 years 4 months ago

Mental spelunking put into

Mental spelunking put into words. I like how you brought in other poets, the different styles. Last two stanzas I enjoyed. raskin
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Raskin

"Spelunking: the hobby or practice of exploring caves". I didn't know that. Many thanks for the feedback! Daniel
Heading South

Heading South

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Mona,

I'm really glad you liked this poem. I know what you mean about struggling to say things perfectly. Language often feels like such a crude instrument in my hands when compared to many of the writers and poets I read. Many thanks for the feedback! Daniel